Once there was a girl called Maggie and her sister called Belle. there mum wanted them to run to town and grab some grocery’s and grab them some sweets for being good .So they ran down the road and past the stables and in to town. They got to the grocery shop and they got salt , Jam , sugar, and some sweets .They got home there mum said I will make tea now you go and play . It came to tea time and they tried there diner it was so salty .Oh no we didn’t read the sign it said sea-salt.
Her sister Belle needs a capital letter because it’s a name.
thank you storm
Also after the full stop “there” needs one to.
ok will fix it storm thank you for that
Also “so” “they” “they” “it” “oh” and at the end it needs a full stop.