Once there was an axolotl called Blinky Bob and he had a best friend that was a killer whale and he lived in Antarctica his name was Bob Blinky. He was a special killer whale because he had a striped back. Blinky Bob was so excited because he was going to travel all the way to Antarctica to see his friend Bob. First he had to swim in the slimy green water. Then he had to swim to the frozen part of the ocean. Finally he got there and found that Bob Blinky had a rubber tail…
Hello! You have chosen two interesting characters for your story. I like how you provided some detail to explain both your characters and setting. Well done.